excellent work, love the face and the 3d she is wearing.
I think the composition is fairly strong but I do have a few comments that I think would improve it.
1) Put the woman on the right, facing left. Icons are usually on the left of the desktop and you'd see her better if this was actually used for a wall
2) Have some more variation in the shades of green. I quite like this one, but when it occupies so much space it becomes a bit intense. Maybe just a bit of layering with different shades and blending modes, perhaps even some complementary tones (check out [link] for an awesome interactive colour wheel)
3) Work the lightning a bit more. The whole thing is almost totally opaque and white. Some variation would make it look a bit less flat IMO (maybe a purple tinge, which would go with the green).
4) Don't really like the texture map on the spherical things behind her head. They just seem too simple, and all mid-tone. They dont really appear to have any depth.
5) Just my opinion, but I think black top and bottom caps would look better, but it could be that doesn't reflect the mood you want.
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aeiko.
nice and creative, some great 3d on the left, not sure if i will have it on my wall, but its a really nice overall design..
great work
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aeiko.
great work man...love the colours and the fact that the object isn't plonked right in the center of the canvas...well done
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I think the composition is fairly strong but I do have a few comments that I think would improve it.
1) Put the woman on the right, facing left. Icons are usually on the left of the desktop and you'd see her better if this was actually used for a wall
2) Have some more variation in the shades of green. I quite like this one, but when it occupies so much space it becomes a bit intense. Maybe just a bit of layering with different shades and blending modes, perhaps even some complementary tones (check out [link] for an awesome interactive colour wheel)
3) Work the lightning a bit more. The whole thing is almost totally opaque and white. Some variation would make it look a bit less flat IMO (maybe a purple tinge, which would go with the green).
4) Don't really like the texture map on the spherical things behind her head. They just seem too simple, and all mid-tone. They dont really appear to have any depth.
5) Just my opinion, but I think black top and bottom caps would look better, but it could be that doesn't reflect the mood you want.
Otherwise
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looks great
and will work as a wallpaper. mac system has the icons on the right. heheeee
feed your head...
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To his second: Yes.
Overall nice work, I like the whole concept
I'm not too sure about the resoultion.. it's a bit weird... 1600x960
I've never seen one like that, unless you Centre it instead of stretch
good work anyway, the girl looks really good
nice greenish !
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